Thursday, February 16, 2012

What Mr.Mattero did

I skipped to the ending I this story and I kinda spoiled it but what I didn't like about one of the main charcters in my story (Claire). I'm not liking how they lied and said the things their music teacher did when he didn't. Just because her friend didn't get ther part in the music concert thingy. Even though she said she didn't feel right doing it, she still went along with it. And it caused this whole big mess. She ended up transferring, her shy friend Suzanne who she's known since like kindergarten went to catholic school. And the stupid (my opinion) Jenna caused her parents to get a divorce. Well not really because of what she did but because her mom was cheating. And now Claire can't talk to either one of them. But Claire was already messed up because she is practiclly anorexic. She barley eats and she randomly talks about calories in anything she's about to eat. Even her mom gave up (exact words) on trying to feed her. I was so happy when Phoebe her new friend told her she could eat, and like burn it off. I mean she still talks about swimming way more than needs, to burn more calories off. But it's a start. Overall I don't really like this story. One because of the characters. Two because the idea makes no sense. No one would ever do something like that. No matter how brainless they may be. And three because of the way it was told. Through the eyes of one of the three girls and the daughter of the music teacher accused. I would of liked if they could of told it through all 3 girls and the teacher himself.

2 comments:

  1. the book you are reading sounds really interesting i think i want to read this. you explained what happens clearly and it kinda grabbed my attention.

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  2. well it tells you what the teacher is doing if it told you in the teachers perspective it would mess up the story alot

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